Black Poetry : Aisle Nine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, May 22, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The floor plan was gung-ho
    On a typical day,
    They know just where it go-
    Joe

    Five fingers discount
    If it goes down nine,
    You'll be out...
    For the eight count

    Fat steaks and video
    Even Tupac, can't hide
    With B.I.G. by his side
    Moet the deal-io ~
    The night club of nine,
    Devoted to crime

    Jammed-up!
    With Five-O
    Can't rent me a cop...
    That ain't on the clock,
    Doc...
    Tic-toc we don't stop
    Til' judgement day,
    Takes me away!


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one right HERE!! keep flowin peace and blessins brutha
     
  3. BeChillin

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    Yo 1,

    This was tight, I love reading all of your poems

    Keep the flow coming

    1:heart:
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte...keep 'em comin'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u drop a masterpiece here
    tyte scribe let da ink drip !!!
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This tyte club of mine,
    Devoted to rhyme...

    1poetsought ~
     
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    definately feelin' this flow!
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya'll blowin' my mind!
     
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    Stop with the modesty. You are raw and it's as simple as that!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm cooking with fire!
     
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