Black Poetry : Ain't Right

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Dec 22, 2005.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know It's time to go

    They must never know

    We both recognize this is wrong

    What we feel is real and strong

    We knew this could never be

    Cuz neither one of us is free

    I know, you know, we ain't right

    But the sh** would have been tight

    Even if, for one nite

    Too bad it had to end

    We can never be friends
     
  2. sonnee01

    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, sometimes you just have to do what you have to do!!! There you have it! :)
     
  3. 1poetsought

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    We may never be just friends but love is there to stay.

    MUCH LOVE ~
     
  4. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like that you are writing and that you are tackling tough issues

    i like that it is complete and to the point

    most of all I liked that you wrote it

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    It was so skrong we can't be friends! Now that's tight.

    A woman did me like that one time. She wanted me to leave my current woman for her...just couldn't do it.

    Tight scribe, scribe. :D

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime it's just not to be a we ....i still see u
     
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    Blaklioness Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AGAIN, my friend, very well expressed.....all the way to the end! :)
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea sometimes i say that myself it aint right thats i movvvvvvessssss on!! enjoyed the flow, flow on poet.:star:
     
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    Just have to brush it off
    keep moving we always want
    It took work yet we know the outcome
    Much Love
     
  10. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the first time i read from you...


    and you came in with a ....


    i must say....


    deep but twisted poem....


    beautifull posed..







    ....
    i can understand it but than again not...




    al i can say is listen to youre heart..
    and follow the truth...



    we al feel things somthimes
    and not every feelings last........


    but real love is strong...
    and last for a long time...
    and trough eternaty...


    that is what i believe...

    i dont know what other people believe..


    but that is what i believe....







    stay close to god sis...


    he will show you what is real and what is not....
    and what is strong...



    i needed to say this...cause
    i love you:heart:






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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