Black Poetry : Ain't nothing like good loving

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweat dripping off my face
    As you increase the pace
    Love how we do our dance
    Wow sprinting to finish the race
    Enjoying this down to the last stroke
    This loving right here ain't no joke
    Gonna explode with one more poke
    Heart in my throat about to choke
    Cause this right here is james brown good
    Wouldn't stop this motion even if i could
    Can't believe you get me this caught up
    Jumping up and down with exciment like a pup
    Purring with satisfication like a sweet kitten
    Boy I can't believe that I am so smitten
    But I have to give honor where it is due
    Got a sister about ready to do flips over you
    mmm! mmm! mmm! Ain't nothing like good loving
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    asimplepoet:
    Say it then....Say it then...
    NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH!
    This was Hott!!!!! your flow
    is on FIYAH!!!!

    Much Luv
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    asimplepoet,

    This is so nice, its sweet and innocent, yet a little sultry. Its the perfect blend, not to hot, but the message comes across clearly. In asimplepoet fashion, its just good, I like it, and I love you!

     
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    sistah girl.... you captured that! Yummy!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sho ya right
    good lovin and it's delight
    da way it swell and release
    make a man ride like a beast
    once in the sign say go
    good lovin continues to flo

    this was so tasty and fire
    ready to go extreme wit such desire
    becareful lady ......whewwww!!!!!!!
     
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    oh boo my panties wet and my candies get sticky won't let this be a quicky because my thighs open and my pies smoking i cries hoping you go deep, oh I'm jest so hot, boo loose my blouse and let the juice douse the head of it can't duck the stress oh suck my breast i think milk exist now the quilt twist bedsprings bounce my wed ring pounce the floor I'm not married anymore oh now he jest say "aw girl dang boo i don't wanna cum don't move your thing like that oh he was jest going crazy (DANG LET ME STOP THIS SLAPPED MYSELF TO WAKE UP)
     
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    Now, that's some good lovin alright, and simple. Gon, flow on.
     
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