Black Poetry : Ain't no Love

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t bother knocking
    Cause there ain’t no love in here
    Heart got tired, soul grew weary
    hopes and dreams float away on a single tear

    Love can’t dwell in an unloved soul
    Passion flickers and dies in the heart of time
    No more tears shed for what could have been
    Loneliness resides in this heart of mine

    Don’t bother knocking
    Love went and moved away
    There ain’t no love in here
    Cause sorrow is here to stay

    Natasha
     
  2. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang this was ill

    loving this keep repping this for real yo felt this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SEE YA BRING DA FOOLISH MAN IN DA GAME

    U LAID THIS ONE OUT AND SLAP THE NO LOVE
    GAME IN DA FACE GURL YA OFF DA HOOK !!
    KEEPIN IT ON DA REAL.....;)
     
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    tugging at the heartstring...

    is that the way it should be
    allowing sorrow to reign
    where love should be

    closed the door to heart and soul
    KNOCK NO MORE
    is that the way the sign goes

    laughter faded as smiles ran away
    and, you, my sistah
    have given up this day

    KNOCK...KNOCK...KNOCK
    open the door
    let me in
    i'll only stay for a moment
    if you wish
    i'll come back again

    KNOCK...KNOCK...KNOCK
    i'm not going away

    KNOCK...KNOCK...KNOCK
    love needs to see you
    ...today.

    KNOCK.
     
  5. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How sad.......

    Natasha, nicely written, who can say what happens to a heart that feels this way. I believe in time the break in the heart heals, doesn't seem that way at the time....but there is healing with time.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha, sis...

    I heard this punctuated by the thump of an upright bass, the sultry rifts of a tenor sax...and the funky rhythmic slide across a snare drum beatin the heart out this joint...


    ****, this is good!

    thank you

    a
     
  7. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes you have to let the sorrow dwell , allowing time for reflections .........thanks fam for the read and the love
     
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