Black Poetry : Aint It Funny

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  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im upset
    so they say
    who gave them the right
    to put to words the i feel.

    They have no idea
    the gut wrenching pain im in
    kailedoscope of emotion tossed
    in a sea of defection
    loneliness oozing from
    every pore
    permeate the air like some
    rank cologne

    The bitterness rise at the
    back of my throat like bile
    threatening to overpower me
    sending me into throes of passion,vile and untamed.
    how dare they rate such immense feeling
    as being upset

    Aint that some ****!

    I swallow
    yet i cant hold it back
    i tremble with effort
    as the quagmire of feelings roil deep in my belly
    body bloated with crazy desire and pain

    But through my red haze
    i watch wonderingly
    as they bicker intelligently
    try so confidently
    to convince me
    that im simply in a daze

    ****! im freaking MAD!
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true respect...

    i know they feel they must
    categorize

    but that's why you must
    continue to
    emphasize

    that you don't
    sympathize
    with ignorant
    lies
    of how they
    theorize

    they
    fantasize
    and
    criticize
    but you
    realize
    self, through your
    REAL EYES...

    1LUV
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    words of real
    and i feel what u feel
    they have no ideal
    mind set in a maze
    bout to faze & daze
    to the notion of myth
    but ya on top
    and down wit dis
    hell
    i know da deal
    but keep afloat
    continue to sho
     
  4. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'CAN'T NOBODY HOLD YOU DOWN"---


    FLAVAZ!!!!I'M LIKIN THIS THREAD......

    WERDZ A WIZDUMB-----DON'T FOKUS,
    CONCENTRATE OR GIVE IN TO THA HYPE.....
    REMEMBER --THA HYPE IZ ONLY HYPE THROUGH THEIR EYEZ.....FEEL ME????


    NICE THREAD LUV......
     
  5. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I DID DO IT.......
     
  6. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TWOFISH YOU SAID IT ... FO' SHO' YEAH, THIS I KNOW
     
  7. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i mad now too..****...lol...i know what you mean...it seems that you feel something so deeply that it seems to have an unearthly identity...and how can someone so simply just give it a name??! nice vent!
     
  8. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thanx ppl!
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you made me feel it!
    well done.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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