Black Poetry : Ain't it Funny

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a dancer on the stage. I accept the role. Dance mister dance. Romance, Oh how I am feeling the pull. Bucket full about to spill. I get mixed emotions. No one to tell. No one I can share this with.Can't give it away, and I can't get it fulfilled. What a go between to be caught in. Tell me what you feel. If you have the blood pumping in your vains. Can you feel me. I hope this moon passes. It's pull is driving my blood to a funny boil. Yes I get this way. Longing for a freedom. I don't recognize. Ain't it funny. :huh:
     
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    nice flow:)
     
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    yup

    i feel you and i understand,
    blood boilin' hold up MAN!
    you ask a question--ain't it funny,
    yeah cuz if feel like butterflies in my tummy
     
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    word...i hear dat...
    tyte scribe...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it ain't funny !!!
    tyte scribe
     
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    all true it aint funny..nice read Hodee
    flow on :angel1:
     
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    longing for a freedom you don't recognize...

    now that's food for thought...although
    somehow I "truly" relate...

    nice flow Hodee!
     
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    feeling you on this
    be thinking along
    those lines some times
    ain't it funny
    nice drop
    Peace
     
  9. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not funny in a Ha.. ha. sort of way.

    But in a it does happen. and why sort of thing. A restless.. stir. Howling at the moon restlessness. Longing for something or somebody special. Once bitten I guess your blood does boil and restless times continue, with no end in sight.
     
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    Tight.

    I'm going through the exact same thing right now.

    Soon, I'm about to assume the role of admirer, dropping little poems on laps.
     
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