Black Poetry : Aight.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Sep 8, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I´m not a singer ..
    but i like to express my feelings..
    I´m not a chef ..
    but i have my cooking skills..
    I´m not an athlete..
    but if its nessecary...
    i run around the world in one
    day...
    I´m not a lawyer ...
    but i can stand up for myself..

    Yes..
    I have accepted ..
    the acceptance..
    that i´m "Aight""
    not Good..
    not Bad....
    but between..

    is Aight...


    I am a painter though ..
    i am colourblind..
    I am a writer but ...
    reading is not one of my favorite things..
    I am a dancer though i tripple so ugly
    sometimes it makes you wanna laugh..
    Some say i am tall but ..
    i often feel small in this world..

    but hey..
    i have accepted ..
    the acceptance..
    that I´m "'Aight"'
    ......yeah Aight..
    not Good..
    not Bad...

    but between is Aight..

    I´m not good in Figures
    but i wont forget ..
    friendly smiles..
    My body is not Perfect in some eyes..
    but i know what Health means..
    I am a believer of the Almighty God..
    but i am Human..
    in Flesh and Blood....
    and for now..
    he tells me...
    that i´m ""Aight"'



    not Good..
    not Bad...

    but between...

    is...

    Al .....Right..
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes.. Yes.. Beautiful. Alright. clap.. clap. clap... clap.. on and on still clapping.
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes you are truelly aight in my eyes. what a beautiful piece girl. lots of love for this one.
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love this! Love the thought and the resolution.
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee,treu Love,and gempis.....you are all aight for feeling this piece ,its persenal....



    Love L
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed , indeed !
    standing ovationnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!
    tyte scribe
     
  7. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are better than aight. And, gurl, this is tyte.
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heck yeah gurl if u R nothin else you R DEFINITELY
    the :bomb:
    :)
    jus hot poetess for real :)
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks richfull rich..Candy randee ,and triumphfull trinity...
    thanks for the love youve shown...



    Love L
     
  10. POETIC BABI

    POETIC BABI Active Member MEMBER

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    HERE, HERE!!
     
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