Black Poetry : Ahhhh-ME-nah-tah (Four syllables)

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    Ahhhh
    ME.....nah/tah
    your four syllables hold
    my tongue and trap me
    in tasting you...............
    if only in a figurative MAN
    n(HER)...........I
    have watched my mind
    create leaves laughing
    after being graced by
    the wind that swallowed
    your four syllables whole
    and spoke your name
    before the spring rain

    Ahhhh
    ME.....nah/tah
    is like some sensual
    soothing chant changing
    bodily directions from
    North to South
    East to SWEAT
    and the letters
    rearrange
    them selves on
    the rays of the sun
    after they are reborn
    during evaporation

    and entering me during
    inhalations have got me
    high.....so high off you
    I saw you dancing among the
    poppy fields of my MEmories
    when I needed a spirit
    to move ME.................

    Ahhhhhhhhhh....ME...
    nah/tah

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    VERB VERB VERB !!!

    DES MOST DEF OFF DA CHAIN!
    HELL YEAH! SPEAK BRUTHA AS
    I :toast: ONE TO U.
     
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    so sensuously beautiful

    so befitting the spirit of the gifted woman of whom you speak!

    excellence in flow~etry!! you phonetically capture the slow groove of an exhale after a satisfying toke, bruh!


    feelin ya ~ feelin it!

    a
     
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    blak

    Once again you have moved Ahhhhh MEnah tah with your brilliant scribes!

    inspired to dance to the rhythms of laugher
    created by leaves from willow trees

    graced by winds that allow
    Ahhh ~ME~ nah tah

    to...

    create blak
    con-figur8shuns

    I shun the wind
    sing in tune to
    blak rain
    rain down on me
    baptized in
    blak PROVERBial YOU

    EyeSEEng your name

    s o o t h i n g

    S e n s u a l

    Essence of Ahhh ~ME~ nah tah

    'swoooooooop'

    In Haled by you and you begin to dance
    embraced by your limbs
    Raising me
    re~birthed to the sun

    Sun~ergy transFerred
    I'm high off you

    MOVED

    by the Essence of your
    verbage
     
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    Ah-ME-nah-tah

    I'm glad you like it! You are most deserving of it.

    one love,blakdini
     
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    what can i say?....

    but nice...

    BUTTER BABY!!!
     
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