Black Poetry : ahhh you!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by byin, Mar 21, 2003.

  1. byin

    byin Member MEMBER

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    AHHH YOU!

    You ahhh you...
    A breath of fresh air
    In the staleness of men
    A wonderful masculine intoxicant
    A stand alone amongst a forrest of imitations
    Silent and barren of empty conversation.
    A lawn waiting for blooms
    A lawn waiting to bloom.
    You ahhh you

    Behind long eyelashes
    curiosity flashes
    and extinguished patience
    sprouts indecent persistence
    which rises like beanstalks
    planted by fairytaled men
    completely capturing our attention.

    You, ahhh, you,
    You, ahhh, you
    You, ahhh, you

    Moonlight bounces off of ebony skin
    Sparkling eyes and dimpling chin
    Full lips puncuate soft statements
    Long legs approach and quickly close in.

    You, ahhh you,
    You, ahhh you
    You, ahhh you
    You, ahhh you

    Mouths breathe warm air
    from breathless lungs
    bodies undulate beneath
    unhurried tongues
    the temperature has risen
    50 degrees in the room
    And magically two people
    slowly become one

    You, ahhh you
    You, ahhh you
    You, ahhh you
    You, ahhh you
    You, ahhh you

    Rythmic spasms rack wet sex
    Hot skin yields, pink walls flex
    big toes curl, slick sweat drips
    the sun rises in the east
    and the bald coc k spits

    You, ahhh you
    Hold me gently and kiss my lips
    trace my nose with your fingertips
    lay your head down on my chest
    and dream of blooms while you rest.
    You ahhh you, You ahhh you
    You
    Ahhh You!
     
  2. Malicious

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    What a great read to start the day!!! Your flow was enchanting, a true breath of freah air....I was enthralled in the moment of your peace. Thank you;)

    ~Malicious~
     
  3. byin

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    Your welcome, and thank you for your thoughtful comments; they inspire.
    peace always,
    byin
    **feel free to pm me with constructive criticism.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet lovin scribe u pose....like da deep red rose
    flow on .......
     
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