Poetry Critiques : AHEAD OF MY TIME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rapchild, Sep 18, 2006.

  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As i sit n open ma book 2 a fresh page/
    west africa,ghana is my birth place/
    yes ghana is a country in the motherland where my flesh stay/
    i love my african people,i love the african continent
    thats what the organ in my chest say/
    with GOD i will progress cuz he gave me a gift as a poet
    to write poem,rnb n rap songs not essays/
    my soul and my mind travel far n beyound
    a decade,may be a century away/
    im ahead of my time,i think thats what i must say/
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice short piece .....
     
  3. Ikoro

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    AH! That was refreshing.

    Keep sharing.

    ~Ikoro
     
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