Black Poetry : ah hah

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SPIRITNORTH, Feb 13, 2004.

  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    i used to write u
    so many letters
    with each syllable hoping
    our chances would get better

    and after the tears
    and all the confusion
    get myself together
    is the only conclusion

    and i admit its hard
    not talking to you
    and its not that i wish
    or really want to

    but i got used to it
    like the abuse and such
    now im looking in and
    see it was all just too much

    i don't worry bout
    where u are or
    if your okay, like i used too
    back in the day

    i don't anticipate
    your arrival like before
    or feel sad when u walk
    out my door

    sooo much energy i wasted
    building on water
    sucha waste
    but i take with me

    many lessons
    not feeling guilty anymore
    what for?
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vary deep and heart felt lesson of pain and the path of finding ones own self.
     
  3. ckei

    ckei Member MEMBER

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    wow...gotta give it to ya on this one, I felt that, hit hard like a load of bricks...keep it Nile style, flowing
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was deep tyte and loud well felt
     
  5. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice :teach: :teach:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nope, no need to feel guilty, just learn and move on when you can...feelin this drop.