Black Poetry : AGE PAST SWAN SONG

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As i sit here in my chambers
    upon the quiet summer day
    hearing the laughter
    as children run & play

    Reading into an artist hand
    written lyrickz nothing to shake
    only the children coming to band
    painting to canvas without a break
    pictured through my envision a fan
    reality cascading nothing fake

    Romance abid to the highest power
    true love flowz nothing sour
    twinkle eyez wicked smile like an tower
    red roses warmth upon da growing flower
    stallion ride age past morrow
    capturing the moment of peace within

    As tranquility points me by da bay
    within da whirlpool of a slow spiral
    as love begin to feel the sun bath
    musical notes of melodies cry
    of the swan song age past
    da handz paints in scribe Queen of art

    Flipping through romantic pages
    as the moon rise , sun set
    children quiet sleepin to rest
    flashing back to what da heart contest
    lips parted yet to confess
    only a chemistry of sounds
    as written vows mound
    heart felt love pound
    through da age past swan song found.


    where do i go from here , from da age past
    and the melody of love singing da swan song
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo rich this was tight....str8 up...mind envisionsssss
     
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    Thankz LURK a million for the visit within
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    I basically luv everything you pen.
    But when you write scribes like this
    I am reminded why I do.
    Beautiful is what this is.

    Much luv
     
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    thank u so much your words means a lot to me dearly 4EVERLUV
     
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    I can hear the swansong playin in my head
    i can feel the age past pitted in my soul
    as my eyez peer upon the artistic handz ....
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Get your hands out my pocket!
    For real Rich..its good to be back...you flowin, trippin the light fantastic...abstractin this write... i love this stanza


    red roses warmth upon da growing flower
    stallion ride age past morrow
    capturing the moment of peace within

    hmmm...sounds so much like me..it's hypnotic...

    great write.
     
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    Another piece where you ponder and reflect. Makes me think of those days when I am so deep in thought, taking in my current surroundings, while pondering about what if... Melancholy, yet, peaceful at the same time.
     
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    hey welcome back abstract219 maybe i was peepin in ya soul ya know !
    thankz a million fo real.............................................................................

    Watz.....sis u know how we take in and pounder all together u so right
    thankz baby a million times for the warm love ......................................
     
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    Wow Rich I love the concept of this piece. The title alone sets the mood....reflective
     
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