Black Poetry : Age Gap - Haiku

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She says she’s older
    Looking at the age difference
    She’s blind to the love
     
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    Having married a younger man, I felt this one alway the way. I had to look past the age...to see his love.

    Thank you Bishop...Joyce
     
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    Bish,

    Ageless haiku...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Bishop

    Very interesting Haiku
    Nice. Thanks for sharing.


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    feeling this hea
    bro

    dssNY
     
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    Think!

    A few provocative words--makes you think--that;s what I love about this particular style--well done--Amun-Ra

    :)
     
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