Black Poetry : Against My Will!!!

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I didn't intend to write you a poem but...

    Love against my will
    grabbed my hand
    led me to my mahogany desk
    and through a blue papermate pen
    deepest sentiment
    MANIFESTED itself
    on yellow paper with green lines
    (even made the manuscript EXTRA fancy)

    Love against my will
    keeps me up late beyond
    my bedtime to cram in
    extra thoughts of you
    before i rest my head
    and dream of you
    vision of how you by my side completes
    the puzzle

    Love against my will
    wakes me before sunrise
    with a smile and purpose

    Love against my will
    is REAL love because
    one cannot willing choose to LOVE!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dyme, dear poet...yes, i totally agree. very nicely written and the flow of this piece just floats. keeep on scribin'. i'm lovin' it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    on the other side of town

    Love had me up all night
    a love understandable
    yet alove that can't be standable
    so wit pen in hand wordz written

    i feel ever line my brutha.....:toast:
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LISTERSCRIBIN'~ thank you so very much for the read.

    $$RICH$$~ As always, u be knowin' brutha... :)

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WRITTEN VIBE OF MIND

    KEEP FLOWIN SO I CAN LEARN :D
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    All i can do is try, right? Hey i'm about to post something new in a minute...i'm a little undecided as to my feelings about it, but i'll see what u and the fam think.

    thanks again,
    Dave
     
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    I loved all of this!!

    *sweet-surrender*
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter-

    all of this was inspired by love....thank you for feeling it.

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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