Black Poetry : again

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SPIRITNORTH, Dec 8, 2003.

  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    i could not understand
    for the life of me
    why u could not
    accept my love.

    and why u got a kick
    out of making a fool
    out of me by
    showing up when u pleased...

    i loved u so much i
    was your bullet proof vest
    your treasure chest
    even tho your sex
    was not the best

    i would have taken
    the knife for you
    if only i had known
    you for once could be
    down for me.

    u gave me up and lost
    touch with my reality and
    the truth that introduced us
    in the first place

    i am the reason you are
    still here but i suppose
    it would be too much to
    believe considering your friends
    are your enemies

    no lies, pure acceptance
    i'd carry u on my back
    if i had too
    in a room i see nobody
    but you.

    i loved
    your overbite , your deep
    voice echoing thru my body
    and your heartbeat against
    my breast
    the grindin' of your teeth
    in slumber, denotes distress

    your insecurity and inability
    to hide if from me
    made me love you even
    when you were broken

    your past read like
    a road map to Vietnam
    no time to cry between
    giving flowers and dodging
    bombs

    i can't be miss lead attorney
    or your babies mama
    or the countless friends who
    laff at you, soon as they
    lick you

    i can't be them because
    they can't be me and
    i am a soldier to say the
    least

    i loved you as in more
    than anything
    i had a song for you my soul
    a symphony
    violins, piano keys and strings.

    but u hurt me
    tried to destroy me
    turned your back on me
    the ultimate betrayal, i
    loyal to you like
    dirt to earth.

    you thought u knew me
    but u didn't
    u saw my tears
    but not my cry
    u saw my faults but
    ignored my gifts and
    i became a martyr
    for her sins..

    her the woman who
    talked down to you
    who was too hard to
    pray for you, the cheater
    the liar, the dope head
    the head strong, the dictator

    held u together superficially
    for many years
    and still u remain broken
    and confused
    inside

    u had it all
    and lost it
    again.......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    re define da essence of true self within deep
    da love is there ....this was awesome flowin here
    tyte scribe poet flow on !!!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could feel the ache in your scribe...quite touching, nicely posed.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow here...
    feel the emotions
    of this write.....flow on
    :angel1:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice SPIRITNORTH

    " CONSIDERING YOUR FRIENDS ARE YOUR ENEMIES. "

    I like this part. You speak truth in the flow.

    The whole piece is very well written and poised. Welcome to Destee.
     
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