Black Poetry : AfterWordz

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The smart side of me says,
    "I'm glad you weren't being
    stupid"...

    An invite to --spend the
    night that suited my fancy
    just fine, and I obliged

    Cause I'm diggin'
    every thing about U~
    and what I could
    possibly be ...in general
    or in your company...

    Subsequential-ly
    there are wordz that
    equate to 'happily ever after'
    ...after...

    After ~ the way
    I felt last night

    ...after...
    After you held me
    until the sun rays
    colored 'honey-do me'
    on two waking bodies
    early this morning

    And wordz could not
    express my gratitude
    for the opportunity
    we had to cum together
    and share the
    privacy of your
    place...
    your living room,
    your kitchen, your
    bathroom,
    the den and mmmmm~
    the bedroom~ filled
    with your scent
    that annointed me
    with your altruistic spirit

    Before, During, and After...

    ...after...
    After~the way
    you smiled when I got
    dressed

    ...after...
    The touching good-bye
    hug and kiss~
    then you walked
    me to the door~~

    AfterWordz
    there is only
    silence...

    Silent whispers in
    breezes that
    blew through our
    atmosphere of thoughtfulness
    leaving us
    speech - less

    ...but you'll remain
    on my mind today

    Just like these words
    I've written...
    ...after...our experience...
    I'll be
    ...thinkin' 'boutcha'...

    The smart side of me says,
    "I shouldn'ta left"...now I
    can hardly wait until the next
    epilogue~



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    well...well...well what can I possibly say that would equate the spirit of this piece...Ummmmmm....probably not a thing that would balance the scale so I'll say "priceless"

    one love,blak

    Ummm...I wonder can you read this while going 75 down the highway on yo' bike? VRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOM!!
     
  3. bassaman

    bassaman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful

    almost too beautiful forWordz

    flow lady!

    ciao
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why thank you....

    Mr. Blak.Akshun.Wurd........you know I always appreciate
    reading your replies!

    Thank you for showin' a sista 'some' love!! :wink:

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  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bassaman~

    Thank you for the comps and for reading ME!



    One :heart:
     
  6. PhWbrown

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    I just want to know...

    what? who? Do I know him? What about me? LOL Ok for real though, this is definitely it...and your are still mcfeders to me.
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afterwordz, before wordz, duringwordz...shucks during a hailstorm butt naked while having a heart attack, this piece is tight!!!!!

    one love,blak
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im like trippin because im think'n.... sure have been there.....(think'n to myself...why did i leave in the first place)lol....

    8th!:eek:
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PhWBrown

    Don't play...no, you don't know him! You are cra Z

    I'm gonna have to :uzi: :eeek:

    and you know why... :confused:


    Thank you for reading this piece of ME... I promise, this person has been truly a 'gent'.... to me!


    One :heart: Ph
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th

    Girl, let it take you back... I ain't mad atcha' ... I know some pieces that I read hit me like that too! That's the beauty of it... like reflections in a mirror that make you think~ poetry can do that, ya' know~



    One.