Black Poetry : After Us

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    After Us.........

    I Felt.......That.....The.........

    Lessons that applied to me,
    babygirl,you taught.....
    When the stress came to rest on my chest
    you got distraught.....
    Now I'm in a position
    where everything seems wrong.....
    Its just the way i feel this pad and pen got me caught...
    Stuck in a trance, ****,
    I danced with the devil....
    ...way too many times,Lord,
    Give me a chance to settle.....
    .....all of my worries
    thoughts sprinkling down like snow flurries....
    Not even that twinkle in your devilish eyes
    can make me listen to your lies
    So stop cursing...................

    Your dirty words may come out clean
    in your dreams.........Here........(hear)
    Listen to yourself for a moment,
    take a potent dose of your own medicine, Fiend..........

    These gentle hands
    cannot measure the level of love you have......

    the level of love you had.........

    the level of love you had........

    Because now I'm only thinking of how glad
    I Truly am......
    to have loved and lost a friend that never
    really loved me back.......

    After us..............




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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    their is another side after the past turn
    tyte scribeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
     
  3. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This...... this was so dayum hot and tyte.....
     
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    i have no words 2 describe how great this was :)
     
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    :hot:

    Day-yum that was good! Wow.
     
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    word....
    "the level of love you had"
    this was on point
    like a hydro joint...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx fo tha love guyz....'preciate it....
    this was written like 2 yrs ago but
    i never felt more like this then now.....

    just lost a someone who i thought was special.....
    that all.......just gotta move on.......

    one!
     
  9. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^^^^
     
  10. angelicsage

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    the rhythm of this piece was off the charts

    the message quite deep..........

    feelin the flow...