Black Poetry : ...after(u)glow.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i be
    saturated in the sounds
    of coltrane & falling rain
    …licking coffee stained
    lips that desperate-ly
    wish for the taste of you

    i be
    set adrift
    on melancholy bliss
    wondering why i’m
    sudden-ly amiss
    …here in this place
    where i’ve
    managed to exist
    …alone… for months
    on end

    but then again

    that was before you
    showed up &
    showed out…
    made me have second
    thoughts about my own
    ****… as you
    slow-ly
    sure-ly
    sweet-ly
    …laid down your
    beautifulblackman lyrics
    to the melodious music
    of my womansong…

    & us sung & hummed
    all morning
    all noon
    all night long… as you
    …worked your
    beautifulblackman magic
    & became my
    one&only habit that’s
    hard as hell to break…

    now…

    i be
    captured for eternity
    inside the afterglow
    of your lovesupreme
    …realizing happi-ly
    that i was destined to be
    love-struck &
    complete-ly stuckonyou.

    (our thing... is as good as it gets.)

    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you

    are indeed the love poet here. I was reading this and my song came on. Layne you are one talented sista.




    One
     
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    Girl this one here is like a lullaby........will you sing this to me?
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    zorb-shun. ...thank you lil sister of myne... for the
    compliments & the support. you are appreciated, chile!

    bish ...sang for you?! ...i sho will... just let me know
    when you will be available! :lol: thanks for the read!! :)
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    beautiful work!

    pd
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you shades of love poetry astound me.

    i'm proud to call you my big head sis. :wink:
    nfinitely
     
  7. mensahpoetic

    mensahpoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    Hey Layna...

    I didn't mean to show up & show out & make you have second thoughts about your ****...but its all good, right? ;)

    You know you're my favorite love poet...

    this piece is an example of your unrealized genius...

    peace, love.
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    mensi ...yeah... it's all good. i know you ain't do
    it on purpose. :lol: thank you for... everything.

    sherrie. ...no more beautiful than the one you are
    in possession of sister dear!! thank You!

    jp. ...you make my heart smile, lil brother... when i
    can actually see around your head. :lol: thanks for the
    nfiniteLove.

    peediddee ...thank you, my dear!! you know you are
    appeciated... Much!!

    :heart: itsallLove, chirens!! :heart:
     
  9. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uhmmm Sunny E (in my quiet voice), you have done it yet again and I'm blown away by the scene you've painted with your words. (whew...) In other words, I likes it a whole lot.

    Much :heart:
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!!!

    I've missed your flow tremendous-ly!!!

    Tight as eva!!!

    :heart:
    GQ