Black Poetry : After Thoughts of Luv

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't no magic whenever we meet~
    now we speak as other people do...
    You work no miracles for me,
    nor I for you
    You were the wind and I the sea--
    there ain't no splendor any more
    I have grown listless beside the
    shore of the pool
    But the pool is safe from your storm
    ~~and from the tide has found surcease...
    I grow more bitter than the sea
    for all the peace you once took away
    from me


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AFTER LUV IN THOUGHTS !!!
    NOW YA GOT ME THINKING...
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Then this piece has
    served you well sweetie!
    Keep them thoughts flowin'!!


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    the after thoughts of luv
    hmmmmm ...
    that's how they be Sis

    nice flow

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee~

    You are right queen. Thanks for the read!
     
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    Summa or Magna Cum Laude???

    N2,

    "Surcease" huh? Dayuumm!!! I love the way you've mastered the English language!!! I'm really diggin' the intelligence of ya scribes!!!

    Mental baby mental!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So let it be written...that this piece was tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight! per usual!

    one love,blak
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....

    me... being a lover of words...
    i have to second GQ... "surcease"??? DAYYUMMM!!

    now!... the piece... Excellent!

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love workin' with ...

    raw verbage GQ~!! :lol:

    Thanks Boo...!
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    You know I thank you!
     
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