Black Poetry : After This Particular Orgasm

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    After this particular orgasm,

    I did something many brothas
    don't…

    I held you gently in my arms

    and thought of many a climax past
    that I didn't consciously perform
    this simple, but oh so important gesture

    You were warmed in my manly embrace,
    secured in my strong mental confidence

    My touch was all you needed to feel
    like the cherished Blak Queen that you are

    After this particular orgasm,

    I did something that few brothas
    do…

    I had a conversation with you

    just talking about the small things
    that mean so much to you; no
    matter how silly

    and

    we laughed out loud as we looked into
    each other's eyes and appreciated
    a completeness in our passion

    After this particular orgasm,

    I did something that a small
    number of brothas dare to
    even comprehend…

    I remained in the dampest spot
    of your secretions, our secretions

    not even thinking twice about it
    because we had just made love
    and our juices were meant to flow

    I was content to lay comfortably there
    in the wetness and moisture of your
    mind, body, and soul

    since

    no natural saturation ever felt so
    lovingly drenching to my senses

    After this particular orgasm,

    I did something most brothas
    are afraid to admit…

    I cried rivers of tears

    for you and for me

    After this particular orgasm,

    I fell in love with you all over again…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    few and far between

    are the men who'd dare share these moments with their woman.
    you are one hellofa man GQ...


    this peace is love...:love:
     
  3. Danilyn

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    Well ****!!!!

    You mean, you didn't go right to sleep like the rest of em?:lol:
    This was tight GQ! Very sweet and loving...
    I'm very impressed!
     
  4. Rashad

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    GQ

    Man you done raised the stakes
    for the brotha's
    Tyte piece poet.
    Tyte!:toast:
     
  5. j'hiah

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    :lol: Danilyn....

    i'm with Rashad, you made the women look at things from a more heartfull perspective (many needed it)

    *going to sleep*
    :lol:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mannn!

    You Whipped! lmao

    You know i'm just foolin dog! Q this was a rather potent peice dog... you managed to post the very expectancy of a woman. Got all down into her desires...lol

    Dropped it like the lovers do.

    Hella tight!

    When I wake up...lol
    Reas
     
  7. MapleXtract

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    Whoa!

    My gentleman of
    quality...
    oh, how do I love
    thee, let me count
    the ways...
    Reas is right, you
    got all this woman
    stuff down
    did you heard (yup
    heard) me???
    I never expect any-
    thing less from you,
    and you 'fulfill' my
    expectations, every
    time...:D
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Cuddling & Conversing the finishing touch of love making. That's just my opinion :D Beautiful flo.

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. alyce

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    these words

    bring back a thousand pictures....

    thank you for sharing what some don't know...

    a
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fam....

    thanks for showing a brotha like "G" some love on this piece...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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