Black Poetry : after the wave...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Jan 30, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...just a little something...
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    an enormous wave washes over
    our bodies...
    simultaneously
    ...our wet sex...
    ...as if we were dying
    we exhaled breath
    of pure satisfaction
    our hearts beat with
    vigor...like we had
    completed a marathon
    our pores weep
    with drops of ecstasy
    muscles that were
    flexed...contorted
    in varied positions
    ...some only gymnast perform...
    relax
    causing our bodies to
    lay limp from exhaustion
    the passion inferno
    now burns as a
    fire of desire
    your hand finds
    its way to my womanhood
    my fingers run down your belly
    to your manhood on the riSE...
    our lips meet briefly
    exchanging a vibe...
    in your raspy sex voice
    you whisper..."c'mon baby"

    after the wave...

    MsDLite (c) 01.01
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    water sports...

    YES...i be hearing this
    {whew}
    reminds me of another piece you wrote
    in which i responded like this:

    {as inspired by MsDlite’s Cascading Waters}

    I sit
    Listening to the sound of
    Waters
    Cascading over the mounds of
    Bodies
    Entwined in the mix of
    Love
    Shared between lovers of
    Two
    Given to the heart of
    You

    SAY YO' WORDS, MsD...make'm groan.:)
     
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    MsD....allow that wave to carry you to me....;)
     
  4. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..thanks for reading/responding...
    this was 100% off the cuff this morning...

    i write for smiles...
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ...some only gymnast perform...

    i couldn't help but smile

    :)
     
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    MsD...you KNOW how I feel about your work...
    and that you can produce such KINETIC FLOW off the cuff, confirms in my mind yo craft is RUFF ENUFF!!!!!! :)

    A
     
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    beautiful

    words, Poetess! Thank you!

    ciao
     
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    Ms.D you know you stay away too long. Thanks for a touch of your ink today.

    BE
     
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