Black Poetry : After the rain (for GA Sunshyne)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw it coming didn't need a warning
    I felt it in my bones / the thunderstorm
    was on it's way / the birds silenced themselves
    to hear my fear my despair / bees sat on the
    windowsill looking in at me as I sat on the edge
    of the bed looking // at my reflection in the
    pool at my feet where happiness used to bathe /
    now it is enslaved by the ripples /
    reactions of plunging tears from my ducts /
    struck with a construct of "too much" life
    on the brain / intoxicated with pain / I pick
    up the phone / busy tone / then I check out
    a poem by GA Sunshyne..........................
    it was a "Yes, Please" piece and even though the
    topic wasn't such I told the Lord "Yes, please"
    lead me to pastures where my mind can graze on
    endorphins and I can get high off of the Sunshyne/
    and he did. Now after the rain had passed I sat
    down to pen this piece because of the scribe
    of a certain Georgia peach sweet as
    honeydewpowderedsugar...

    (c) 2001 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERBBBB....

    I LOVE WHAT YOU DO TO ME!! ;)
    (i saw you post that in response to
    a piece that someone else wrote & i
    had to steal it for this situation)

    this is a pleasant surprise... thank you!
    you have bryghtened my entire year &
    ThatsReal... :)

    you are entitled to INFINITE SUNSHYNE...

    AlwaysLove:heart:...
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now das deep GA...lmao he aint brighten ya day he done closed out da rest of the year... lmao!

    BV it was poppin dog!!! I gotz love fa Sunshyne as well. she get's nuthin but respect. as do you!

    Reas
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah BV...

    she most def shines after every rain!!!

    Nice tribute ta her!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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