Black Poetry : AFTER THE BETRAYAL

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, Aug 22, 2006.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit here looking at a blank screen
    Wishing for some words so keen
    But I am beyond all reason
    I have lost my poet's season
    My emotions are just to raw
    From the sight i just saw
    I want to let out a scream
    For the splintered dream
    Breakin but not quite broken
    but its destruction is spoken
    I sat with colleted tears
    Not for the wasted years
    but for lost this could be
    For noone loves ya like me
    I know her grass looks better
    But it just wetter
    Shining from her tears
    Misery always seeks a friend
    Her siren cry sucks you in
    But I'll be within a shout
    When she spews you out
    Cause that's what friends do
    Even when you put them through
    Before it all we were friends first
    And promised thru the worst
    Although your actions are foul
    I'm stickin with my sacred vow
    I don't promise sun shine
    Just that you still be mine
    For I have invested to much
    To throw it away for such
    this too shall surely past
    for we were built to last
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed we was and forever will be built to last past any stage
    tyte flow
     
  3. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop poet
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sure the green grass looks greener on the other side, he will soon know to mow his own lawn.
    thanks for the drop poet.
     
  5. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LOVE FAMILY
     
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    :luvv: lovely drop, it just seem to flo on and on right into the next line.
     
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    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this...

    It seep raw emotions with the struggling task, of not becoming bitter. To maintain a friendship, when the possibility of being lovers may no-longer exist.


    nice write

    SmoovV
     
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