Black Poetry : After Love Comes Thunder

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hunter, Aug 28, 2001.

  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the day
    the thunder came
    I was
    Still
    mysteriously loving you

    had just pulled
    my panties back on

    when your rain came
    down on me
    and drowned me with

    “...I mean...I love you...
    But I am not ‘in-love’
    with you..anymore”

    and I swam
    towards shallow waters
    (cos’ that’s just what
    strong swimmers would do)
    and asked you to float
    beside me

    “baby please...can we just
    try to work it out?”

    But then you became
    the thunder
    and darkness
    erased the blue

    and it struck me
    that your storm
    had been brewing
    long

    while I was
    still
    just pulling
    my panties
    back on


    *Liquid Flows*

    Hunter
    All Rights Reserved
     
  2. KRYizar

    KRYizar Banned

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    yes! good piece! I think, but are you guy or a gurl?
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gotta hate dem masked folks...

    why can't people just be REAL about who they are and what they want...and stop playing games with hearts and emotions and bodies that don't belong to them.

    let the river flow.
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this was strong hunter!
    thank you for sharing this one
    sister/friend!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HUMMMM!

    TYGHT VIBE FO SHO! HUNTER
    FOLKZ BE LIKE THAT SOM' TYME
     
  6. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful and heartfelt:
    BUT Honey... heres your PT II

    after the rain went away I felt the rays of
    sun come shinning down...
    I strecthed my hands up to the sky and smelled butterflys
    and tasted the fresh wheat.
    I began to grow like April flowers
    I began to breathe again
    even after your storm....
     
  7. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speechless...

    ...yes, i know...

    keep it real~
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!!

    that's all there's left 2 say....

    nfinitely,
    jh.
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sad

    how someone can just take anothers heart and stomp on it..
    like it was nothing....
    sunshine always follows rain..
    time to walk in the sun...

    K
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter...still dropping jewels I see. Good work Queen.

    blak
     
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