Black Poetry : AFTER INFATUATION

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  1. sherlita~

    sherlita~ Member MEMBER

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    After
    my unreasoning
    passion of
    infatuation
    I danced in violet
    rain,collected
    every drop and
    formed geometric
    shapes. I even
    arranged a pleasing
    succession of sounds
    upon the surface of
    the river stream,then
    suddenly expelled
    melodious emotion in
    an act of ebullience.

    After infatuation my
    evening seemed glorious.
    I reached out and touched
    the golden light beaming
    through my window,and I
    blasted that new Jill Scott
    until the speakers blew.
    As the intensity elevated
    so did my intellectual activity.

    I
    piled
    &
    piled
    resplendent thoughts
    so many inches beneath
    my braids,while a great
    magnitude of feelings
    resided within me,mob deep
    making me a shook one.
    After infatuation I dug honeysuckles,
    newheights,flowers,
    and cool jazz. I spoke in foreign
    language,studied the history
    of italy,paris and the civilization
    of ancient rome. I was distant
    from the norm,my actions were unusal.

    Taken by so much emotion,
    my heart began beating so
    fast I could hear my cardiac
    muscle cells repeatedly generate
    spontaneous action potentials
    that then triggered my heart
    contractions. After feeling
    so tensed,I quickly changed
    into my favorite dress, slipped
    on a fly pair if stilettos,and
    ran and hopped upon the subway.
    I
    stayed
    on
    until
    I got
    uptown,
    came to
    my stop,
    hopped off,
    and walked away
    striding in a hasty vigor manner.
    Now I'm finally here,LIVE and I've
    realized I'm passed the feeling of
    overwhelemed. I've come this far;
    this way just to say,
    DAMIT,
    I'M
    IN
    LOVE
    WITH
    YOU!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the ride of love can take u higher
    this was tyte ...........................
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop....love will take you there
     
  4. sherlita~

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    thanks ya'll
     
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    nice joint....and intense flow
    keep it going...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    I'm in love with the way that you express infatuation! :flowers:
     
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    wow...thanks people!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You strike just the right balance of delicate description, and genuine prose. Such an enjoyable artful read. Flow on poet.
     
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    The writer did a good job of conveying their feelings in this piece.
    Thanx for sharing.
     
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