Black Poetry : AFTER HOURS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Metree, Sep 26, 2003.

  1. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HELLO MY LUV
    HOW U DOING THIS EVENING
    IT'S GOOD TO SEE U
    ALL HEALTHY AND STRONG.

    I'M SO GLAD THAT U CAME ALONG
    INTO MY CIRCLE TO LITE THE CANDLE
    OF SOME LONELY DAYS
    I WASN'T SURE WHEN SOMEONE
    WOULD COME MY WAY

    DINNER IS SERVED
    AND THE CANDLES ARE LIT
    I GOTTA NICE SPREAD ON DA TABLE
    AND U GONNA BE THE DIP.

    RED/WHITE WINE
    THAT'S YOUR PICK
    JUST KEEP IN MIND
    U GONNA GET THIS ****

    NOW TELL ME
    HOW IS THE SWEETS
    BETWEEN THOSE TWIN TOWERS
    IS IT MARINATING 4 ME?

    PINK LIPS
    BLOOMING LIKE A FLOWER
    A SUCCULENT TREAT
    FOR THIS PARTICULAR HOUR.

    PERFECT FEET
    PAINTED TO PERFECTION
    DANG GURL
    I GOT AN ERECTION.

    U KNOW WHAT
    THE DINNER CAN WAIT
    CAUSE RIGHT NOW
    I'M LOOKING AT YOUR BUTT STEAK.

    GET THE OIL
    AND MAKE IT QUICK
    I JUST LEARNED SUMPTIN
    THAT'S GONNA MAKE IT STICK.

    BRING DA FEATHER
    AND THAT BLUE LINGERIE
    THIS GONNA TAKE ALL NIGHT
    U MIGHT HAVE TO STAY.

    BANG!`
    BANG!
    NIEGHBORS CALLING
    STOP ALL DAT NOISE!
    CAN'T GET NO SLEEP
    ME AND BOYS.

    OK!
    OK!
    NOT A PROBLEM,
    I WAS JUST TRYING TO KNOCK IT OUT
    AT THIS HOUR.


    :) :D :kiss:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    red alert hot chilly
    tyte scribe
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot: :flamet: is al i can say
     
  4. Bluewater

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    :) this is making me smile :)
    very nice poem
    Peace
     
  5. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the luv guys.

    $$Rich$$ it's a taste I crave when I write.

    mzblkangel thanks for your response

    bluewater: i'm new just making my own path
     
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