Black Poetry : After an argument, i wrote this

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "The Nobility... of it all"






    How Noble of you to end my suffering.

    The heartache of lonely's only unending night.

    The pain of an embraced wished for, the unforgiving...

    --- well, you get the point.

    How truly Noble of you to fill my void, to come in.

    But is the company of a tear drenched face
    easier to bear than lonely's only unending night ?
    Are my tears in exchange for yours the only
    currency that buys solace ?

    How Noble of me to think I may have been better alone.

    On my honorable quest to find the love of all love's --
    yeah, that's that nobility **** ain't it ?

    My solitude to ponder, My self to learn, My world to conquer.
    But **** those loneliest of lonely's only unending night.

    I'm sorry giving you teddy bear's just isn't my thing.

    I'm sorry for loving you more as a person than as my
    end all to be all.

    How Noble of me to think I was so noble.

    The L of Lover is over... done and overdone.

    I want nature to take it's course, take my course and
    I'll return the favor.

    Maybe then, we won't have to rely on THE NOBILITY of
    it all.

    What we thought.

    What we saw.

    What we felt.

    Maybe then, we won't have to be noble -

    cuz the only eyes that see your tears up close,
    are your own.
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaay Hypnotize :wave:

    Good to be reading you again ... thanks for sharing.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha Hyp ....

    Hey .... I'm diggin the "noble" matters at hand in this piece
    and all of its depth!!

    N2
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sometimes love takes this route

    i loved this line
    The L of Lover is over... done and overdone

    great HYP

    piece son
    and you heard the saying about fish

    DSS
     
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    hyp...nice flow bruh, no doubt.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *applause*

    "Are my tears in exchange for yours the only
    currency that buys solace ?" mhm.

    and i could keep quoting...
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is it me? Or was the ending cold...hmmm, nice flow tho.
     
  8. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all very much.

    I'm not a regular here anymore - but i am a familiar face greeting
    familiar faces.

    I don't know whether or not to let the subject of this poem
    know about it --- it might not be constructive.

    Thank you all again.


    Big Sis and Big bro --- always a pleasure.


    So'ja, what about fishes ?
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    there are many in the sea

    peace poet good to see you
    ain't nothing change
     
  10. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes it is good to see you again hypnotize - and I am feelin your concept of 'nobility' here - it's an interesting view to take

    peace and blessings

    1luv
    2fish
     
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