Black Poetry : After all that....I STILL love you

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two legitmate children
    And four illegitmate children
    Five affairs with five different women
    Three had children by yo semen
    You neglect me
    Tell me you love me
    Then put your fist up to me
    Beat me
    And then tell me you hate me

    Five punches to the face
    A hundred curse words used in haste
    A house not a home, it's a waste
    Evil stares in the night, never any grace
    Twenty Four Seven, you make me feel less
    And seven days a week, three times a day, I still fix your meal. there's neva any rest

    B!tches callin' our house
    Makin' me turn mad 360 degrees like hot sauce
    After you take the call and turn stranger to our house

    Babies askin' where daddy at
    Missing their birthdays and makin' them sad
    So depressed, you got me turning fat
    I can't believe that
    Am I that bad?

    You come in late at night
    Turn on the light
    Come straight to bed and snoggle me tight
    I can smell the other woman's scent. That ain't right
    I wake you up, and we begin to fight
    And it turns into a blurred vision when I'm told another good lie
    So good, I start to doubt myself, why?

    It's been ten years in this home
    And over the years I'm suddenly alone
    Cryin' alone
    Got our baby holding me telling me it's aiight, even though I know she's wrong

    And after all that, I still love you
    Why? I don't know but I do
    ****, after all we've been through
    I should hate you
    I should be throwing your clothes out the back window
    And cursing you
    But I'm at ease, just when I see you
    And get to be near you
    It's crazy :insane: to understand for many, maybe even you
    But after all that, I STILL want you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got into the mindset of someone who lives in the hopes of what could be, or should be, but not what is. You always put a lot of detail into your pieces poet, great to read you again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa deep , heavy and sad !
    venting out ..........................
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks watz. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you for given me props and feeling me. Much luv sis.
     
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    Yeah, it was sad but it's also the poem that tells the plot to my up and coming book. It comes out in July. It's going to be in the back of the book. The book is called "Played". Look out for it.Thanks Rich for feeling me on this.
     
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