Black Poetry : Afro Blu

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  1. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She's afro blu
    Her beauty is magical

    It captures you
    and raptures you
    with sweet, sonic
    lullabies

    I've heard her cry
    under the eye of
    the night clutching
    the Moon's rays
    tight, waiting to
    receive the Sun's light

    She's afro blu
    Of a mesmerizing hue
    True to the breath
    and beauty of the Nile

    Burt-skinned child
    who was chosen to
    lead us into the valleys
    of lakes where the Soul is
    showered with spiritual
    re-awakening

    Afro blu
    Apocalyptic you
    Sing please a song
    that turns man's wrongs
    into ascension and Truth

    Sing afro blu
    Sing afro blu

    Accomplish what is simply natural
    and ritual to you.

    The powerful and melodic music of Lizz Wright's
    recording "Salt" inspired me carve this piece.

    UniverSouLove
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was phat afro blu Tyte
    flow on coz this be singing
     
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    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok ok ok....thas a tyte cut
    that you scribe this poem to...
    this poem lives up to dat song....word
    one love
    khasm
     
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    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks much brother Khasm. i appreciate it.

    it's good that you've heard the song bro.

    the Cd is beautiful and inspirational, as well as musical and soulful.

    thanks again.

    peace,
    UniverSouL
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was mad deep and I was totally feeling the depth of this flow
     
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    Tyte' Beautiful Picturesque Rhythm & Rhyme

    A Celebration of Afro-Centric Majesty

    I Lubbs dis Poem...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go head brotha...I've missed ya voice roun here :)
     
  9. UniverSouL

    UniverSouL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thank you all for your comments. i truly appreciate them. :)

    peace, power and poetry always,
    universoulove
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Usoul,

    brother you still drops 'em hot mos def. keep hittin heads brother.

    ya ace,

    blak
     
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