Black Poetry : Afrikans In America

Most Amazing!!!!

This is an excellent work, soblessed, most Power-Full!!!!
 
I know how hard you worked on this piece
I know you are proud that the words came from your pen
that the very thoughts eeeeked out of your mind
Never knowing that beauty can flow so easily from you
speaking pain into colors blue and red and yellow and black

Oh my goodness stepping back and wondering
Did these words come from me
Or have i tapped into my ancestors in ways
That they now minister to me about the soul
The soul of the universe
Now I am found tapping into mindlines
where the essence of eve flows through me

the thoughts go many places
you are found wanting to write in your sleep
In your wake and in daydreams
somone pinch me is the thought
For you find another poem wrote down
and another and anothe and
some level of you want to cry
for where did this all come from

And now you cannot do without it
found addicted to the pen and pc
and mommy, daddy, yo church
Look what i done wrote
Just want you to know how
beautiful it is and how in love I am with it

Yea love
another aspect of it
brought out in words
dedicated i am creative
for i discovered I am
now a stick no longer a stick

I vow to write always
now says SoBlessed
for she has found that she has given birth
to an invisible part of her that she can see
making her want validation and a podium from whtich to speak

She just wants to say she is a writer
does anyone see it
the pride that wells from her
when for so long she held dark things
thinking those were the things that held her reflection
and now light, like the horizon bursting into day

If noone ever says it remember
you are worthy of expression
that even your dumbest thought can illuminate the sky
for there is nothing small about you
Not even Patrice C Queen do you even need to say good job

Remember when you see yourself for who you truly are
Then you know how mighty God is
That even redemption seems like a story
For the glory of all things shine in you
Sometimes it shine through poetry

I thought I should say all that
cause I want you to always look within when you write
that sometimes your scribe is something to evolve you
when you look without for validation
You might miss the lesson that you first had to teach self
then next for whomever

So write on, write on
know that if I never look at another of your pieces
that they are worth something and they are worth u
evrything that is you is priceless

oh yea...... loved how you flowed Afrikans in America
I get the impression you trying to say something
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I wonder what you will say next and next and next
As i watch u grow as a writer it makes me feel good
to turn on the light and show you yourself
believe u me all I am doing is turning on the light
it is u that write the words you barely recognize
the way you know it you can look at your journal
see lines you wrote word for word

Peace

Patrice

keep your humility honest
let nothing take your joy away
of how you wrote twinkle twinkle little star
much love SoBlessed
 
Thank you Monetary ...Don't ya know I am dangerous already...LOL ... Seriously Thank you....

Thank you Lazarus.....I try to be versatile....Thanks for responding

Thank you Richness...
Oldsoul Thank You I am honored that you replied and for you to say Most Amazing, I am truly honored...

Thank you sista nevar...Luv ya

And Patrice, My dear sweet sista
Thank you, for your words of wisdom, Thank you for your kindness, Thank you for excepting me for me, Thank you for believing in me, Thank you for wanting more for me, Thank you for pushing me to my best and Thank you for being an excellent teacher and an Inspiration..
I thank you from the bottom of my heart....
 

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