Black Poetry : african AMERICAN DREAM

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  1. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dont hold my hand
    cause you stopping me from grabbing success
    its in my reach i can see it
    i want it and nothing less

    I want to do the impossible
    if i can't do it i want to try
    i want to have the intangible
    if not in life then when i die

    i am the great AFRICAN AMERICAN DREAM
    never heard of it?
    thats why im telling

    its the keeping your head above water
    the still going when your failing

    its waiting for the best
    but getting there early to see your options
    it's the falsity in reality
    and the reality in perceptions

    it drive and determination
    its never giving up

    its throwing away that rabbits foot cause...
    "I DONT BELIEVE IN LUCK"
    it's that prayer before you do something
    it's that prayer when it's over

    it's that sweet determination
    it's the heart in a fallen soldier

    I am the great AFRICAN AMERICAN DREAM
    I am preparing for success because I have no choice but to succeed.
     
  2. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaahhhhhh THIS IS JUS...MAN
    I AM SPEECHLESS!!! I CAN'T
    EVEN PUT WORDS TOGETHER.
    ONCE I DO
    I'LL HIT YOU UP
    LOVE THIS
    GOD BLESS :D
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice scribe here...
    likes this flow...:angel1:
     
  4. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Badu!!!
     
  5. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks MZBLK!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome....
    very nice write....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very positive vibe..keep flowin.
     
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