Black Poetry : Afraid to love...

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember when i was young..
    i used to bumb into the wrong souls..
    I was searching for love...
    they dumpt me....
    because i probebly wasnt good enough...
    but as a child i always got up and went on..
    i wasnt afraid to love.....

    but now..

    that thing that i was capable to break..
    has now build itself around me..
    its not the Chinese...
    not the Berlin...
    but "'tha wall"
    i think its there...
    no i know..
    its ..
    there..

    It keeps the feelings inside...
    and it holds back the feelings..
    from outside...
    Somethimes some one comes..
    and takes one stone away...
    than there is a small opening to
    let sumthing in or out...
    i feel human than..
    a little butterfly has been set free..
    and fly,s to tha sun...
    than comes back home
    and brings another one
    along..

    But somethimes someone takes the same stone..

    and puts it back...
    and ....
    I,m locked up again...

    I dont expect that some one will come..
    and try,s to save me...
    for only God can do..

    But please Keep trowing those...
    Love comets towards me..
    crushing "tha wall"
    flushing the stones..
    thawing the glue..

    if you hit me..
    i wont say...

    ""the ball was out""

    And if that army of butterfly,s.
    comes running after you..
    chasing you...
    dont be afraid....
    if they are not ment for you...
    he will lead them...
    to their destination.

    At least they have been set free !

    cause i want to love...

    and be loved again...

    It sound ClICHE but...



    Love is all that i,m living for.....









    but i,m afraid....
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OoO.....This was good...but don't live to love sum1 becuz you can find the wrong one :)\
    \
    Love is worth living for...but don't forget theres more
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one so loveth thou self forth shall be loved
    when u live in the grasp of love to hold love
    feel love'd taste love it all start with the look
    in the mirror and the crack in the wall
    to ware the heart shall feel da bliss
    i love dis flow it was written from the compassion of da heart
    tyte scribe
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sweet rich...
    thanks swt......i just want to reply
    i life my life ..i work...i strife ,i enjoy nature,i love my brotha,s and sista,s,i thank god for giving me life...
    but i am here on this earth to love.....if i can give love to a child or if i receave love of my dad or a sister or brotha.....than i,m already happy....but if no one would love me or there was no one i can give my love to.................
    than i tel ya .......that god could take me away from that moment..
    i,m not searching...i,m single now again for almost two years ...(i,m still living)before that i had a relationship....actually i didnt have one because of the 2 years of the four i never saw him because he was in jail..and when he came back (because this person waited for him)the others two years..i didnt saw him that much to because he had "things "'to do...before i met him i was also single..
    i do believe that when youre searching that you end up with the wrong person.....
    but i would tell you a lie if i say that it gets lonely somethimes...
    and that if i would stay alone as long as i live on this earth that i,m Full happy.................
    because i wasnt made for that...
    i,m a woman...

    Sweetyyyyy SWT lolololol you probebly think whats up with her so sudden what a personal loooooong story...
    sorry but you HIt a sensetive spot....
    much love liberty
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol i mean i would tell you a lie if i told you that it DOEsnt get lonely.....thats what i ment.....
     
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    yes love is embrace within a child or any human being
    we are place to give love as to be loved forth the loveth of
    thou master above has allowed .......
     
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    Very touching Liberty...
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys...



    bless ya,,,,
     
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    hey liberty
    feeling you on this
    afraid of the
    love not coming back
    heartfelted, very deep
    much love to you
    my sister
    Peace
     
  10. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was really good. And just to let you know I feel the same way. I get lonely every night. Well it's not so bad now. I was engaged to someone and we was together for three years. That recently came to an end about 6 months ago but Its not so bad cause I know if no one else love me I will always be loved because i love my self. So when you get lonely you have a shoulder to lean on and i'll love you (only as a friend) :lol: the same way I love my self


    Poetic Sista
     
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