Quiet Poetry Lounge : AFFAIRS OF THE HEART

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  1. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AFFAIRS OF THE HEART








    Blessings of a Goddess,

    Earths sovereign, the glow of a red-hot fire,

    Shame not thy surfaced, lusty coursers

    Precedents of pith and embrace,

    Lustful language afar, bashful burns of shame.

    How can I not choose love?







    Upon the promise of loyalty

    Strength less doves, flowing through the skies

    Can thy right hand seize love, upon the morning dawn?

    Fields of arms, still I rise, I sing for love,

    a heart with a wound, alone in my loneliness

    betrayal of my cocoon.





    Thou heart cries, for your embrace,

    breeder by thou nature art to bound,

    death to thy self, without you I am faceless to self,

    by law of regards, Twas then thee said, thou love thee,

    for I was, splendors of love, I crown thee with mortal praise,

    thou hold back, none of my words.

    Un passion thou words like a sword, I seek for forgiven love,

    Oh thou kneel upon your feet, forgive thee,

    for thou have great love.

    I begging upon your heals, I shall die if thou leave,

    the affairs of the heart, thou forgiven love.



    Copywriter 2002
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed the heart is forgiven and caring
    this was beautiful
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truly wonderful
    how you let it flow
    deep felt
    Peace
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the flow...really nice
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet melancholy piece!

    This was a beautiful piece that made me want to play some "Luther", longing for that unconditonal love ....whoa, you laid it down with "Class"!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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