Black Poetry : Affaire d' amour

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by epiphany, Feb 9, 2003.

  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We met
    on a moonlit night
    at Ca'fe Rendezvous
    live jazz fills the ambient
    atmosphere with clues
    solo patrons converging
    to partake of chance
    ~I no different
    blended into the potpourri
    of random hearts
    ~in search of love
    ~in need of romance
    ~in need of pleasure
    like a subtle wish....
    he appeared
    an exquisite entrance
    a defined silhouette
    tall, dark, a black knight
    as he entered the light
    his eyes summon like
    a deep cauldron of yen
    speechless for a moment
    I quivered at his gaze
    succumb to the charm
    of his handsome face
    with a baritone voice
    he asked me to dance
    politely consenting
    to his overtures
    we embrace under
    lamps of fire...
    encircling passions
    we dip and glide to
    anonymous arrangements
    of harmonic degrees
    performed in our psyche
    with each wave...
    my heart skipped a beat
    as if destine to be
    he sashaying me....
    I follow in captivity
    to his hypnotic steps
    dancing, romancing
    and trancing...
    til the rise of early dawn
    as the sun brings light
    to the fading lamps
    the music serenades
    .......quintessential
    elements of our soul
    rekindling flames of desire
    ~out of the blue
    he kissed my beckoning lips...

    and whispers....

    "I will always love you...Babygirl"

    ~I smile and whisper

    ........"Ditto"



    Epiphany(c)2002
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epip

    let's see here this

    "blended into the potpourri
    of random hearts"

    and

    "politely consenting
    to his overtures"

    oh yeah and this one here

    "anonymous arrangements
    of harmonic degrees "

    and the icing on the cake

    "as if destine to be
    he sashaying me....
    I follow in captivity
    to his hypnotic steps"


    my goodness, you brought it fo sho!!!!!!!



    One
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let no one ever doubt "the power of the pen"...and the abilities of she who make the strokes stroke deep.:)

    always doing what you do so brilliantly.

    THANK YOU.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully scribe
    da stroke of ya pen makes love feel devine
    flow on ! epip.
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epip...first let me say it is so long since I have read your work...it's good to see you again...

    and this peace is just beautiful....exciting, romantic, sexual, physical...

    K
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is it right here!

    you are da bomb girrirl.. better thank the age gap :wink:
     
  7. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    beautiful work!

    keep it up

    guys we caught up bigtime :lol:

    pd

    :)
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!! this was great...I was in so deep...thanks for the flow!
     
  9. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Poets,

    I appreciate every read & response...:grouphug:
    much love to y'all..:luvv:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  10. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    epip.


    ...it's always a pleasure to immerse
    myself in your words!! this was so
    enchanting!! thank you for sharing.

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
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