Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Feb 9, 2005.
The Dark Sage Series
for sharing your thoughts, your life, you...with us.
Sweet sister, you are singin to me. It's so hard to keep believing in your dreams, especially as the years wear you down. You shined a light on the mechanisms of this dark place.....beautiful work, as always.
Much love and respect, Sage.
heartfelt, glad i could relate to this poem . One day those dreams will float on down, just depends on your patience to wait on them
I wish as you do, that I didn't/don't feel a thing ...but I do as well ...too well. I wish I didn't feel this piece, to the core ...but I do ...too well. For I am my brother's keeper.
Awesomely deep piece, as always
to quote a poet i know "the energy beneath
these words were
thats what this one was
I am speechless
your touching the true feelings of self discovery ...love the look inside your mind...thanks for sharing .....loving you and your poetry ..hookup aways
OMG!!!! That was awesome. I am blown away :flamet:
Wow! your imagery has left its footprints on my mind
Once again, U have grabbed my mind & shook it...
Very nice piece.
truly a masterful poem...
not only in its imagery
but in it's rhythms and
it's use of repetition...echoing
the inner self..
really nice (nice is not the right word)
really a rich poetic piece
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