Black Poetry : ...............adversity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Feb 9, 2005.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Dark Sage Series
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Sage...

    Nice...very passionate.

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts, your life, you...with us.

    :toast:
     
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    Sweet sister, you are singin to me. It's so hard to keep believing in your dreams, especially as the years wear you down. You shined a light on the mechanisms of this dark place.....beautiful work, as always.

    Much love and respect, Sage.
     
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    heartfelt, glad i could relate to this poem . One day those dreams will float on down, just depends on your patience to wait on them
     
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    I wish as you do, that I didn't/don't feel a thing ...but I do as well ...too well. I wish I didn't feel this piece, to the core ...but I do ...too well. For I am my brother's keeper.
    Awesomely deep piece, as always
     
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    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    to quote a poet i know "the energy beneath
    these words were
    torrential..."
    thats what this one was

    I am speechless
    your touching the true feelings of self discovery ...love the look inside your mind...thanks for sharing .....loving you and your poetry ..hookup aways :thinking:
     
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    OMG!!!! That was awesome. I am blown away :flamet:
     
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    Wow! your imagery has left its footprints on my mind
     
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    Once again, U have grabbed my mind & shook it...

    Very nice piece.

    Peace.
     
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    truly a masterful poem...
    not only in its imagery
    but in it's rhythms and
    it's use of repetition...echoing
    the inner self..
    really nice (nice is not the right word)
    really a rich poetic piece
     
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