Black Poetry : Adrift with Swift lyrics

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Dec 16, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Adrift with Swift lyrics

    A glitterthug not a litterbug so I don’t throw whack trash on highways
    Got class nowadays a mellow zone in art like Yellowstone park folks praise
    This site to see when I write this spree cats stand and gaze
    From sidewalks as my pride talk, my raps boss and keen it
    Cost to clean up lyrics need a dang broom to help my slang bloom legit
    Some cats brain expand size of a grain of sand the lame don’t understand
    Good rap they come with hood crap if I could slap them with knowledge
    I would, rhyme be all bulky tall and gawky like skinny chicks much garbage
    Exists in rap, got all sorts of rhymes and a short time to write this brisk
    Stuff, some cats kick it wild and like a sick child at risk go and piss
    In their pants, no strength flow length very weak while I bury the streets
    In lyrics, defeat strongly and eat only weak rappers with them freak
    Chapters, fiddle with quotes got little hope of becoming famous stumbling
    Like a Amous and Andy comedy in this economy my cash is crumbling
    Like Humpty Dumpty a well done egg that fell off a ledge humming
    Yankee Doodle riding a phony pony, look my mind float being guided
    Down a river of sense so I deliver suspense in my writing undivided
    Fear corrupt friction need clear cut ambition with direction and protection
    Got a hot stink blend making the top of my ink pen come unattached
    While it’s latched to my notebook my quotes look vague nobody can match
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  2. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rhymebad - I hear your glitter as it flitters down to my senses. We all attempt to express this madness we live in. Some find the words easy and others grope and awkwardly fall on the rocks and stones on the road. But if the ones ahead can pick up those stones so the ones coming behind will stumble less, then we're destined to hear good rap and not hood crap. You have a distinct style rhymebad and it grabs ya. Liked your work here. Namyh
     
  3. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This read ias if you were on one and just started freestylin' this was dope ... and I haven't said that in a long time about any particular piece. I'll be back thru' Keep cre8'in
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u did it with a flair and style untouched keep it coming in da mix .....I like dis one
     
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