Black Poetry : "Adonis"- Sex, Love and Lyric

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  1. BrittanyMalachi

    BrittanyMalachi Active Member MEMBER

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    I've never seen a man
    Who could hold such beauty
    I must tell of this truth
    It is my duty
    Voice so deep
    Yet so smooth
    Your introduction
    Met my heart's groove
    When I touched your hand
    I felt such strength
    My heart grew fond
    I had new intent
    Church bells rang
    I saw a picket fence
    The feelings I was having
    Were quite intense
    Conversation so filling
    I could eat all day
    I prayed that God
    Would send love my way
    You told me of your history
    Of past love
    I wanted to be your future
    One you could speak good of
    I wanted love to last
    But I knew it had to start
    But it wouldn't take much
    You already had my heart
    Love at first sight
    You had me at "hello"
    Filled my heart
    Gave me a glow
    Every word from your lips
    Gave me such pleasure
    I wanted to taste
    I wanted to treasure
    Your smile
    Your laugh
    The gleam in your eyes
    The way you looked at me
    Made my temperature rise
    Then I wondered
    "How would it be with you?"
    When the night called
    What things would you do
    But I erased the thought
    It was too soon
    Look at how quickly
    Passion can consume
    Then time passed
    And it was time for your exit
    I wanted you to stay
    If only I could fix it
    Extend time
    Make you mine
    Give you a love
    That would always shine
    But then came your embrace
    I was immediately taken
    The touch of your body
    Left me shaken
    It was in that moment
    I was sold
    If only my words
    Were so bold

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    If you boldly gave him a copy of this he would definitely by all yours...dope flow nice use of verbiage deeply felt this...
     
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    I wish....All my correspondence to him has been ignored. I don't think his memory of me is good. I think he would rather forget me than to share in the love I have for him. Sometimes life deals you those type of cards. You can either play them and risk losing or fold and give it to God. I've given it to God. Instead of "stalking" him, I write my poems and pray. Perhaps he'll have a change of heart one day. Perhaps God has something better for me and I just need to release all that I have for my Adonis so I can make room for new love. Right now, I can't see beyond my passion which is strong for him. It's torture, but I endure. God doesn't give us more than we can bare....
     
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