Black Poetry : ADMIRATION

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hearts2: ADMIRATION :hearts2:

    Allow me to express what I feel for you
    my admiration for you is as wide as the sea
    Never in my life did I think that god would pick a guy like you for me
    never thought I’d meet a guy with all good qualities
    Everything about you gives my tummy butterflies
    I can feel the warmth when I stare into your eyes
    I enjoy your company so much that I hate when I have to say goodbye
    You’re the sweetest thing I’ve ever known
    even sweeter then an ice cream cone
    your skin smooth and brown like chocolate
    your lips soft and sweet like taffy
    you and me together it had to be destiny
    I can see us together in the future
    filled with love
    because deep in my heart I know that you’re the one
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully said go get the very one in ya heart !
    nice
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was such a lovely flow, I'm sure the one who gives you butterflies will just love it. Flow on.
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so nicely done. I can tell your in love. that's sweet.
     
  5. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    glad to know yall enjoyed my poem and yes i'm in love ver in love!!!! :hearts1: :smooch:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How well I remember those feelings ...here's a tip, ..."always keep love new"
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this was so sweet.....


    you go girl...


    express youre love...

    squize him and hug him..

    as much as you can


    i enjoyed this read ....i havent readed from you yet...
    so i like to say hi and welcome to destee,s place:heart:




    lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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