Black Poetry : adm-I-ration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissPoetik, Nov 27, 2002.

  1. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it was a cool winter night and i was...
    dripping wet from a warm bubble bath
    i stepped out and began to oil my body
    as my fingers inched their way down the path
    i accidentally grazed over "that spot"
    and sent chills up my own spine
    the mirror reflected an illustrious image
    it was me and **** was i fine
    self love beyond words
    meanwhile my fingers continued to flow
    up & down, around & around
    not fast..! i was workin' it slow!
    hips moving, thighs shaking
    and it didn't take long for me to reach that peak
    **** i'm not even gonna lie
    it felt so good that i couldn't even speak
    but i had to...
    i had to call out my own name
    self-admiration intertwined in self-gratification
    lacking the ability to feel shame
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: Now I've gotta take a cold shower.
     
  3. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: admiration

    lol... i know. i forgot to warn ya'll about this one. :eeek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeee!!!!

    RED ALERT !!!!!!
    done knock me from flyte wit dis one
    ya on fire and i need a ice cold bath!:hot: :hot: :hot:
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOT HOT HOT MY FRIEND!!
    I feel ya on that girl!!! WOOOOOO WEEEEE!!!
     
  6. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...

    thanks... :)
     
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    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i lost my words
    somewhere in this poem
    so i don't know what else to say but

    ****!!!

    ****!!!

    NittyGritt ReddClay
     
  8. NICELOCKS820

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    DAYUMN!!!!! THIS WAS HOT!
    (oh yeah,,and on the low........I can relate!!) you go soul sista!
    flow on........
     
  9. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh ****! yeah this is definitely HOT! i'm speechless. lol
     
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