Black Poetry : ADDICTIONAL FREE/DUMB

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    We dip in the pool
    spinning in safe habor
    relaxing on the hill
    at that moment of
    visional maze i ask
    for the free/dumb
    of so many who are
    caught in the middle
    in waves of da deep
    look at them in slumber
    sleep this commotional
    beast fall to the knees
    of confessed weep
    addiction taken control
    this how our world roll
    by the white devil Cocaine
    to the lazy boy Heroin
    even cuz Alcohol twist
    dancin through a bliss
    a course of remorse, pity & woes
    not long be a tag to da toes
    death came across the land
    see i'm a junkie too
    but not the one like u
    i'm addicted to these words
    and the scribe it reside
    addicted to poetry at hand
    and the mic vibing stand
    i'm a junkie to a poem so
    deeply determined to stay high
    i love my poetic-el-splato
    it's no joke it can make u blow
    sometime take u on a deep
    sweep u off ya feet awaken u
    from ya sleep make u even weep
    but the crap u push
    feeling funny & loose
    like elements of death
    bonding no truth kills the thrill
    this real so please chill and
    get locked in my drug
    and taste the poetic word !!!!

    Addictional ova flow :eek:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many talents we hold within that can give us that natural high. But there are those who become tempted, and are already weak, and sucumb to that high that can kill. I really liked the positivity in this piece, something the poets in particular can relate to. Flow on brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true if every poem written a life is saved the world
    would become more free from the addiction of HAC !
    Thankz for the visit and support sista watz
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We too love your poetic-el-splato!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz 1poet poetry is a key in life once we get to know it .
     
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    WHOOO!!!!!

    Now lessee, first of all, this thing is so tight.

    Next, so fulla truth!

    And this line: i love my poetic-el-splato

    That's an instant classic, $$RICH$$. Come to think of it, this entire poem is. Dang, baby! Awesome.
     
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    U know gempis nothing like the feel of
    Poetic-el-splato it release something deep inside
    thank u sista for the lovin support.......................
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow Rich i like the way you twisted this and made a masterpiece of truth love it!!!!!!!!
     
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    Keep postin you are one of my favorites
     
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    thankz angel i was in a funk u know how i get at times

    wow......versatile thank u i'm so humbled and feel good from your words
    thank u , thank u , thank u !!!!!!!!!
     
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