Black Poetry : Addiction

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DaFlavaFul, Oct 2, 2002.

  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Does it ease ur mind
    if u never see me again
    I know u wont, u have a heart filled with coal
    many come , but many dont go
    your magnetic force has such a hold
    but i aint even trying to go out like that.

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    A pimp with a mind and his hunger grows
    he could ease into your soul
    the weaker u are the quicker he swirls
    out on a mission to destroy your world.
    dont get lost in his heady sensations
    palpitations
    exceeds moderation and blossoms in to a
    oddity
    that has u fixed and feening
    limp and pleading
    for his touch
    the addict rush, the constant touch,
    aftersex blush, the solemn hush
    aaahhhh!
    just to be filled with his lush oooh!
    until your brimming
    trembling
    screaming
    clinging
    yeilding
    until there is nothing left to give and u r left a fiend.
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah

    I'm diggin ya Flava



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Flava i'm feelin dis here to da end
     
  4. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx for the love yall!
     
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    Very interesting...I am liking it though
    You have a unique way of expressing yourself

    Keep on writing and inspiring others to do the same
     
  6. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha. lovin the flow and fiende over here for certain!! keep droppin!
     
  7. Destee

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    DaFlavaFul ... you're scare'n me ...

    I want some palpitate'n kinda stuff ... gosh ... addiction you say? :wink:

    Very Nice Work.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey just gotta let it flow right! M.Destee didnt mean to scare ya! lol
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Caught me off gaurd

    I liked this-- I was reading and then all of a sudden i hit me--well done--Amun-Ra

    :cool:
     
  10. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Ra! Sher big up LaDy, for being my first real friend on here!
    thanx for yall critique
    yall style of writing is absolutely wonderful
     
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