Black Poetry : addiction

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShadeeLadee, Jun 20, 2002.

  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I woke up in the middle of the night
    and looked over at you, black as tar
    in the fetal position like you must have
    been when you blessed your mother's womb

    But I wondered "what am I doing here?"

    You're not mine; not afterwards, anyway
    the gush of love runs straight from you
    to me, and it happens rather quickly
    but in those few seconds, I hold on tight

    Still I wondered as you snored softly, "where is this going?"

    I'm not yours, only when you're making
    me scream ridiculous things, fist pounding
    the sheets and I'm crying cause it's going deep
    and deeper, and deepest and...

    so I wondered as your hand began to stroke my thighs again,
    "why can't I stop?"


    Shade
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now

    you know this here is on point... I see whatcha sayin'





    One
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shade.


    i have been silenced... effective-ly by this heah!

    i don't think there are many sistahs who can say
    with complete honesty that they don't know where
    you are comin' from in this peace! vivid imagery...
    true to life concept... i'm lovin' it... indeed!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shade, girl this is an awesome flow..........Got to keep you in my sights!!!
     
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    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel U... NICE Flow...
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Addiction is right...feeling your pleasure and your pain in this piece...thanks for sharing.
     
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    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, that whole lust thing is a mutha- Truth is, in our community this is a reality issue, especially since so many of us locked up, and sisters ain't got too many choices. Most of you know where I stand on this- but if sisters wanna do the 'right' thing they gots to defer and support their own sisters.. gots to put themselves in the other's shoe. This is skid mark true to what's happening though.

    JAH Lives.
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    oh oh

    girl i can't tell you why :lol:

    nice flow ShadeeLadee

    very nice

    pd :)
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most of us have been there...

    Feeling you on this...It's so hard to resist!
    Girl it's that **** Pleasure Principle, yeah! That's what it is.
    Loved how you worked it though!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as the say, the mind knows better but the heart is thirsty for the gentle caress of love's affection.

    let the river flow.
     
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