Black Poetry : addiction

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UL820, Jan 15, 2002.

  1. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have this
    addiction
    does not appoint me
    does not appall me
    makes me scribble
    legend,lesson,legacy
    and makes me log
    faults,feelings,failings
    and spend midnight
    way too often
    away from cumming
    counting
    courting
    stitching
    vowels and consonants
    words and phrases
    I have this
    addiction
    that slices,splices
    syllables
    love and lonliness
    partying and pitying
    put down and praise
    I have this
    addiction
    to putting
    words on paper
    seeking to cage
    LIFES' SONG
    to the page
    I have this
    addiction
    please forgive me
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UL...

    Can't forgive ya for this hella nice flow!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya flow

    of greatness in da garden of perfection.......:)
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the rhythm of alliteration is ear candy..."legend, lesson,legacy" and "faults, feelings, and failings" and the others. Classic. this piece was a 10 plus.

    blak
     
  5. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ...$RICH...blak
    appreciate the luv
    ...goes a long ways
    still battling the
    don't write rule
    so Thank You
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UL820

    I love+ the way you scribe. This is an addiction I would encourage.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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