Black Poetry : Addicted

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sevens_love, Aug 31, 2004.

  1. sevens_love

    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm trying out a new style...a new flow. This is how I played it out in my mind. Feel free to offer any suggestions.
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    …mmmmm
    I need a fix…
    I am…
    I’m
    addicted​
    to​
    you​
    It’s something I just can’t shake…
    hhhmmmm….and baby
    detox won’t help this case…
    I
    want​
    you…​
    penetrating the flesh without breaking the skin…
    the rise
    and
    f​
    a​
    l​
    l​
    of each tantalizing stroke….
    …mmmmm
    pulsating…
    gyrations…​
    ahhhhhh
    …hahaaaaa
    ...the vibrations
    can you feel it…
    mmmmm…
    baby, you know you have that good shhhhhhhh…
    my high baby…
    it’s…​
    it’s…​
    overwhelmingly climatic
    I can feel it….
    traveling…
    all…​
    up…​
    inside…​
    of…​
    me…​
    mmmmm…
    haha…tell me what you are thinking…
    I see your “come sex me stare.”
    hold up love…
    I’m not talking about that rhythmic dance between the sheets…
    haha…naw baby
    I’m talking about your sublime love.
    I’m soooooooooo fixated on your love.
    …transfixed
    but never perplexed
    I’m so addicted…
    to your…
    orgasmic love…​

    Seven (c) 2004
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet... :hot: Poet... :hot: Poet :hot:

    that new style is workin...^5

    This piece was off the chain!

    Loved it!
     
  3. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the way you made the words go diagonal. that was a nice effect.
     
  4. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice. That was a cool flow.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 awesome scribing here this was phat u really made
    a smooth creation wit tyte creativity.......flow on !

    Do keep in mind to become a PREMIUM MEMBER to
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  6. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Only suggestion I can add is to keep
    on bringing it!!!

    I'm definately feeling your vibe!!!!!!!!
    Tyte peice Poet!! :hot:
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    not only did you write it..you visualize the vibrations
    and the highs and lows..
    nice...
     
  8. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang! that was very hot. I love erotic love poems! Please share more!
     
  9. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^5 again! Dapz!
     
  10. sevens_love

    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks lovelies :sand:

    I will be sure to work on the subscription
     
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