Black Poetry : Addicted

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lloyd, Aug 13, 2004.

  1. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just hold me tight &
    we'll be out of sight
    we'll run of time & place
    we'll be gone without a trace
    just give me one good reason i'm not gonna be yours
    or you won't be mine
    take my hand &
    we'll be just fine
    noone can or will ever
    take your place
    you'll be my endless blaze
    it's not just a phase
    you're the air i breathe
    so don't ever go please
    we are the perfect end
    for all the love we transcend
    the way i feel inside no no
    i can't run or hide
    all i want is to be by your side
    all the days & all the nights
    in the kisses & in the fights
    through our wrongs & through our rights
    you are my everything
    feel my heart swing
    for all the joy you bring
    we turn winter into spring
    let them see
    our lives cling & they'll know
    it's not just a fling
    wherever do you go
    or wherever i may go
    one thing i want you to know
    that i love you so
    more than words can ever show
    & i don't know what to do
    but to let you know
    i know people always change
    but i want you to remembr
    that our love will never be something
    we can exchange
    i can't explain it
    lovin you feels so right
    & worth the fight
    just hold me tight &
    we'll be out of sight
    you give m satisfiction&
    i wish i'll be your cureless addiction
    in us forever we have protection
    just hold me tight&
    we'll be out of sight
    we'll run out of time & place
    we'll be gone without a trace.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful..
     
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    Holding you tight
    In the midnight
    Take our time
    And release
    I have no reason
    For this is the season
    We turn winter into spring
    No phase….
    Inside this passion
    We are transcending
    Off a new level
    Don’t run nor hide
    Let me kiss you
    and blaze this hot fire
    For your desires…..
    Will be satisfied
    To satisfaction….
    We will be out of sight
    In this midnight mix…..
    Gone without a trace..

    well hmmmm this was a nice vibe...enjoyed this read
    flow head on!!!! i couldnt help myself :wink:

    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    Itz really...wow!!!wonderful!ur word just come fluently...Let me clap for ya!I'm...sein' a future star
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop like dis here
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Hello Lloyd :wave:

    Gosh ... can i get some of this LOVE !!!! :love:

    Man ... you make a Sister wanna be in love ... any kinda love ... just give me Love!

    Beautiful!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really sweet:)
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very touching peace!
     
  9. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to Lloyd

    Lloyd, addiction to a lover I can relate
    But as time marchs! Addicts learn to hate!

    Seize the Day!
    Great Poem YOU have made!

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You

    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
  10. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thx

    Everybody for ur replies!They were very deep n full of luv!A particular "Hi" to my sis Destee;i wanna say that life ain't a thing without luv!Each of us as an enormous potential of luv,datz why i wanna keep u from the cold with one part of mine!U feel the heath?Itz just my luv surrounding u ;)
     
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