Black Poetry : Acuity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Feb 19, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This morning I awoke
    to a brand new day

    A day unlike no other
    in my mind

    I awoke with a smile
    on my face

    Ain’t it funny that the
    way we feel does in
    fact show on our face?

    This long awaited
    relief from stress and
    strife enraptured me

    The question in my mind
    reverberates…

    penetrates…

    delineates…

    all perceptions in time

    That of

    If I fall, will I be caught?

    I tend to think there is
    a deeper meaning to
    life even when I trip over
    my own two left feet
    (soul & mind)
    when it comes to my
    own

    philosophically
    produced
    prudence


    There's this acuity that
    surrounds my senses
    in real time

    Unveils my reason
    in falsetto tones

    Makes sane my insanity
    when I wonder explicitly

    Overstanding to the fullest

    Wisdom learned
    is
    Knowledge shared

    I now stand very aware of

    who I am…

    Are you?

    ©GQINC2K2​
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good Question GQ!
    and the answer is Yes!
    Tyte scribe poet!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed GQ da sharing & learning
    is da wisdom & knowledge one's teach
    truely i listen intently yes i'm ready!....

    THANKZ 4 DIS
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    ..."philosophically produced prudence"
    (i can dig this!)

    i love it when you give me things to think about.

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    Very tyte & enjoyable read. Scribe On Poet!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    am i? good question. love the poem keep um coming
     
  7. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    This ones drippin with science...as I re-read I find other aspects ..
    tight peice !

    peace
    g-man
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pondering the question...

    knowledge/awareness of self? hmmm. i can safely say that i'm very aware of who i am...including my limitations. but you've made me think.

    THANKS for flowing.