Black Poetry : ACTION

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Dec 28, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ACTION

    Become impressive fast like excessive gas swelling diguestive
    Tracts when I’m telling impressive facts got to be protective
    This stuff corrupt and will puff up faces like bee stings I see
    Bling fall off necks a lot of fury for your jewelry best pay a fee
    My quotes slaughter and float like a boat on water a crazy cost
    For some gravy and sauce yall grab a dish while my vocab toss
    And twist your spaghetti are yall ready for this swearty treat
    Must create plates of flavor with great rap behavior its all street
    My type hidden quotes are like written notes which are short
    Letters got all sorts of clever words you never heard don’t snort
    Crack eighter, do strong talk and a long walk is a hike to a resort
    Like insects my ebonics come as a symphonic hum ready
    To bite and attack when I write facts on paper steady
    Rhyme particles are like newspaper articles these headlines
    Will get chumps drunk like red wines and pack lead in nines
    Can’t keep a true wrong too long folks will think you weird
    Then your quotes’ll be stink and feared by everyone else steered
    Into life, make a freak choice and my weak voice will never
    Sing again and your bling will spin instead of shine so be clever
    Blank amount in your bank account now loco in the mind dang
    Need somebody to co-sign wanna speak proper redesign my slang
    Flow prevailing in scripts then go sailing on ships but in nice words
    I duck icebergs, could panic and have a Titanic sink and swerve
    To the bottom of the ocean which is a rotten potion of failure you
    Can ask Kate Winslow, get a warning every morning paraphanalia brew
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    throw rocks and flow hot then go flock like birds giant like RHODAN go stand on mountain tops and drink from fountains non stop, pull a gun is not full of fun to have to shoot freaks and pollute the streets with blood tried to get away no **** chance **** here comes the ambulance **** I got busted because I shot a cat 's hat off ain't that a *****
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U telling me ...whewww !!!
     
  4. Cade Foster

    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was horribly written, you possess no skill at all.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Cade Foster let this served as your

    FINAL WARNING .......stop !!!!
     
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