Black Poetry : Acting On Love

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I yearn to touch you with the candor of
    a man who loves his woman with ease
    You are the reason why I feel the way I do
    and you are surely the fire that drives me to

    act on love

    To justify my hunger to love you and only
    you would be a true crime of pointless energy;
    for I become powerless if my love is unknown
    and cannot be felt within the confines of your being

    So I act upon my feelings since there’s no logic
    needed to let you know that I long for you, and that
    my love, could never be construed as wrong

    I am strengthened by the heat of knowing
    that the best part of you causes me to emote
    warmly inside and out since it is you who is
    tucked securely away; deeply within me

    I smile at the tamed obsession I have for you
    in my heart and in my soul that slowly caresses
    that pointed need in the secrecy of my body;
    longing to be satisfied as completely as I covet

    Let me feel you then until there is no such
    expression to describe what love is; for the
    intense love I desire to act out with you is far too
    wonderful for words; so I remain silent and
    simply connect us to a soothingly calm sense of same;
    inducing

    one body;
    one spirit;
    one pulse

    enticing me to

    act on love

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shiiwoowww....

    dang peep your skillz got me making up words. :D

    tyte read :thanks:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    **** Q... ya ready to rock da house wit love vibes
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    pure flava
    pure flava

    poet

    G
    you laid dis hea

    DSS
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mannn... i love luuuv!
    thanks for this! -7:spinstar:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q

    this is the craziest dog!!! flows so smooth it almost melts...lol

    Reas
     
  7. elayne.

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    bighead.


    mmm mmm mmm & mmm!! :)

    ...that's all imma say.
    (at least in the open forum. :lol: )

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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