Quiet Poetry Lounge : Act Like an Adult...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by coey30, Apr 17, 2012.

  1. coey30

    coey30 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I find I'm not like most
    I'm deeper
    I genuinely care about other but I'm nobodys preacher
    I write what I see and feel not seeking approval
    Most are long and too deep and ready for removal

    See I found that words had power to move and help others
    And some are just was needed for my sisters, brothers
    Dead beat fathers and Add water mothers
    So remember the next time we want to act a fool
    Somebody's kid
    Maybe even yours
    Is watching you
     
  2. MsVeraisblessed

    MsVeraisblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you coey30 for this

    It speaks so much volumes. Hopefully someone is listening to this..
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    being that "positive brother" example.

    keep doing what you do.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the concept i know this so well stay on the path
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the message.

    (smile)
     
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