Black Poetry : Act Like A Adult

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by coey30, Jan 31, 2013.

  1. coey30

    coey30 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I find I'm not like most
    I'm deeper
    I genuinely care about other but I'm nobodys preacher
    I write what I see and feel not seeking approval
    Most are long and too deep and ready for removal

    See I found that words had power to move and help others
    And some are just was needed for my sisters, brothers
    Dead beat fathers and Add water mothers
    So remember the next time we want to act a fool
    Somebody's kid
    Maybe even yours
    Is watching you
     
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    Asomfwaa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice. "Add water mothers." Haha.

    But it's truth. Some folk around kids act like--not like adults.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can relate flow right on without approval.....
     
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